6/08/2006

Reviewing 101: John Updike's rules

Thirty-one years ago, in the introduction to "Picked Up Pieces," his second collection of assorted prose, John Updike laid down his own six rules for reviewing. They are still the single best guide to fairness today:

"My rules," he writes, "shaped intaglio-fashion by youthful traumas at the receiving end of critical opinion, were and are:

1. Try to understand what the author wished to do, and do not blame him for not achieving what he did not attempt.

2. Give him enough direct quotation--at least one extended passage--of the book's prose so the review's reader can form his own impression, can get his own taste.

3. Confirm your description of the book with quotation from the book, if only phrase-long, rather than proceeding by fuzzy precis.

4. Go easy on plot summary, and do not give away the ending. (How astounded and indignant was I, when innocent, to find reviewers blabbing, and with the sublime inaccuracy of drunken lords reporting on a peasants' revolt, all the turns of my suspenseful and surpriseful narrative! Most ironically, the only readers who approach a book as the author intends, unpolluted by pre-knowledge of the plot, are the detested reviewers themselves. And then, years later, the blessed fool who picks the volume at random from a library shelf.)

5. If the book is judged deficient, cite a successful example along the same lines, from the author's ouevre or elsewhere. Try to understand the failure. Sure it's his and not yours?

To these concrete five might be added a vaguer sixth, having to do with maintaining a chemical purity in the reaction between product and appraiser. Do not accept for review a book you are predisposed to dislike, or committed by friendship to like. Do not imagine yourself a caretaker of any tradition, an enforcer of any party standards, a warrior in an idealogical battle, a corrections officer of any kind. Never, never (John Aldridge, Norman Podhoretz) try to put the author "in his place," making him a pawn in a contest with other reviewers. Review the book, not the reputation. Submit to whatever spell, weak or strong, is being cast. Better to praise and share than blame and ban. The communion between reviewer and his public is based upon the presumption of certain possible joys in reading, and all our discriminations should curve toward that end."

21 Comments:

Blogger cedar said...

Was there a particular reason for this to be written using only male examples, or are we being old school this week?

11:58 PM  
Blogger John Freeman said...

Well, it is 30 years old, and that's how it appeared in the book. You're right, though, it reveals an unfortunate (and unflattering) sexism at work in the language itself. Still, antiquated sexual politics aside, I think the rules are still worth following, whatever the sex of the critic.

12:17 AM  
Blogger Mr. Mass said...

He's not using "male examples." He's using male personal and possesive pronouns. I believe this is a common writing convention that helps to avoid use of the clumsy "his or her" construction and the impersonal "one." Furthermore, its use avoids the confusion that results from frequent (and often arbitrary) gender shifts in the language. It's a question of style, I think, rather than substance.

11:11 AM  
Blogger J said...

It's nice to have a visit from the PC police. Go have a donut on me and have a great day officer.

11:31 AM  
Blogger The Sanity Inspector said...

I'll bet Updike has something trenchant to say about reviewers who ignore the pith of a piece, and seize upon pronoun usage, or some other pc hobbyhorse.

2:05 PM  
Blogger Rebecca Jane said...

I appreciate the comment about the Reviewer's relationship to the public based on an understanding about the joys of reading. This insight reminds us that reviewers have a responsibility. They are, in some sense, "ideal" readers and might do well to embrace their position with a high sense of service and integrity.

8:23 PM  
Blogger Amy Charles said...

It's Updike, for crying out loud. You know, the one with all the penises. Rampant, etc. Do not blame the author for not achieving what he did not attempt.

11:57 PM  
Blogger Ed said...

Thems is good advices.

6:21 PM  
Blogger bibliobibuli said...

thanks very much for this - shall paste it on my wall to remind me!

7:51 PM  
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8:00 PM  
Blogger King said...

These seem to be rules for how to write a bland review.
Is there a reason few people read book review sections?
We seem to have stumbled upon the answer.

2:03 PM  
Blogger Nick said...

I will feel free to use the masculine pronoun when ever the gender of the referent is unknown until someone can show me gender-neutral writing in English that is clean, natural, and graceful.

I agree with the goals of gender-neutral language, and I believe we should include all people in our language about people. But it's implementations--alternating genders in succeeding paragraphs or pages, the his/hers constructions, or the herm/hesh neo-pronouns--call attention to themselves at the expense of the prose.

There are a few workable ways of neutralizing gender in language, plural constructions ("They should..."), impersonal pronouns ("One should..."), or specificity ("A critic should..."). But to go too much further than this is inclusiveness at the expense of sound prose.

12:05 PM  
Blogger Kaz Augustin said...

I will feel free to use the masculine pronoun when ever the gender of the referent is unknown until someone can show me gender-neutral writing in English that is clean, natural, and graceful.

And I shall feel free to use the feminine pronoun because, quite simply, they are the majority of human beings.

12:48 AM  
Blogger Marlon James said...

Did I just read nearly 13 comments on what gender pronoun a writer must use to make a general statement? With all that's going wrong with reading and writing in America, THIS is what you choose to argue about? This must be the political correctness I was warned about before I moved here.

9:01 AM  
Blogger Notabene said...

These are what you might call kind rules for reviewing. Updike veers close to boosterism, when he talks of communion. Boosterism for reading. As if he doesn’t want to scare away readers. They might not come back. Emphasize the positive, just look on the bright side of life, as Brian said. I’m not sure this does a service to the reader.

Updike’s sixth point is more pragmatic than Auden’s advice: simply avoid reviewing bad books. Often there’s no choice. But a bad book’s bluff must be called. Otherwise literature lounges, moulds. That’s why James Wood is so good for the American novel.

As for number one, while it’s unfair to criticize a writer for failing to achieve what he didn’t set out to achieve, I think it’s more than fair to criticize him for lack of ambition. Ian McEwan Amsterdam and Julian Barnes Flaubert’s Parrot can be pillored for this, I think. Sorry, couldn't think of any female examples...

10:15 PM  
Anonymous Craig said...

Why would we foucs on gender specific pronouns from a piece that is Thirty years old? Even if it was written today wouldn't it be the aurhor's choice on how to handle gender issues. This is a post about reviewing writing, and some people (note the lack of gender) want to use it as a soap box for their cause. Get off the soap box and write!

3:24 PM  
Anonymous Dave at Read Street said...

I wouldn't get too hung up on the gender usage, considering when Updike was writing. For an even more jarring example, just look back at his classic New Yorker piece on Ted Williams' last game at Fenway Park: "Hub Fans Bid Kid Adieu." Updike describes Williams "playing catch with a young Negro outfielder named Willie Tasby." Ugh.

12:03 PM  
Blogger Edmond Caldwell said...

The remarkable thing about James Wood's consistently hostile reviews of John Updike is how well their derogations apply to Wood's own writing, for which it would be hard to find a more apt description than "lyric kitsch." It's almost as if Wood saw his own reflection in Updike's prose and reacted, well . . . hysterically.

11:35 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Duhhhh!!! The Reader is supposed to work out for themselves (himself? herself?) that Updike is also writing about how HE would like to be treated by a reviewer.

It is an elegant and witty plea as much as a piece of advice.

What a bore the kneejerkers are.

3:09 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Thank you, Craig, for addressing the shortsightedness of the reader concerned about Updike's use of the male pronoun. What a limiting way of reading. Never mind the insights that the piece includes; let's just look at it through the lens of whatever political point of view preoccupies us. Cedar, you must be a lot of fun to talk to. Do you listen to the content of conversations, or do you just remain vigilant for potential violations of your politics on the part of the speaker?

1:06 PM  
Blogger honeybee33 said...

I find it humorous (and circular) that soooo many have chosen to so substantially pick on cedar's initial reflection of this piece.

Take your own advice much? ;~)

~ hb33 ~

10:23 AM  

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